Revise the following sentences, add coordination where appropriate and removing faulty or excessive coordination.

Revise the following sentences, add coordination where appropriate and removing faulty or excessive coordination. 1. Congress is expected to pass the biotechnology bill. The president already has said he will veto it. 2. Mortgage rates have dropped. Home buying is likely to increase in the near future. 3. The earth trembled. The long-dreaded cataclysm had … Read more